So at this point, I had greatly improved the design to make it simple and coherent so the reader can go through it easily, from one point to the next.  Also, I had come up with a title "Sometimes I Go to the Gym".  I decided on this title because I wanted to appeal to all college students, not just the diehards and gym rats.  And although the title is somewhat sarcastic, the tone of the rest of the newsletter is serious enough to not drive away the more hard-core gym goers.

 

However, there is much that needed to be done.  To name a few things that I thought needed work:

• Keep the font consistent throughout

• Emphasize the articles, not the additional material

• Keep the theme of offseason training more consistent throughout

• Incorporate social media